问题详情：
Today I’d like to share one of my unforgettable experience with everyone present. My parents had arranged a party for my 18th birthday at a hotel. It was raining heavy outside, so we had to stay inside all night. The room was packed with guests dancing together while we saw smoke. All begin to panic because there were so many of us that we couldn’t get out quickly. Thankfully, we managed open a window and get out of the burning building. To my sorrow, some of them had to go to hospital because of breathing problems and the room which the party took place was completely destroyed. Afterwards, I was told that a building had been struck by lightning and the firefighters had spent about 3 hours putting off the fire.
【回答】
第一句experience 改为 experiences 第二句had去掉
第三句heavy 改为 heavily 第四句while 改为when
第五句begin 改为began 第六句managed后加to
第七句them 改为 us , which 改为 where或改为in which
第八句a 改为the , off 改为 out
知识点：其他
题型：短文改错
