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请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。

请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。提示:(1)Whatarethemanandtheboy...

提示:

(1)What are the man and the boy doing?

(2)What kind of influence does using mobile phones may bring?

(3)What is your attitude (态度) towards this behavior?

要求:

(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;

(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名;

(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。

参考词汇:secretly; technology; natural; convenient; focus on (集中注意力在……上)

We can see a man and a boy in the picture. The man is______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【回答】

We can see a man and a boy in the picture. The man is teaching a class. The boy is having a class, But he is playing with his mobile phone secretly.

With the fast development of technology, it is natural for students to have mobile phones in hand. They can use their mobile phones to do something they like at any time in any place. It seems very convenient. But the mobile phones also bring some bad influences on their study and life. They can’t focus on their study. They lose themselves in their own life and don’t want to communicate with others.

As students, I think we should pay attention to what our teacher says instead of playing with the phones. What’s more, we can’t spend too much time playing with the phones in our free time.

【解析】1.题干解读:本篇是看图作文,首先要仔细观察图中那男人的和男孩在干什么,以此为线索,谈谈使用手机会带来什么样的影响并阐述自己对这种行为所持的态度;书写时要注意发挥想象力,使短文的内容完整合理。图片描述的是正在发生的动作,用现在进行时,谈论手机的影响和自己的观点用一般现在时。

2.例文点评:本例文层次分明。文章按照先描述画面内容,接着陈述使用手机会带来的影响并阐述自己对这种行为所持的态度;最后阐述自己对课堂上使用手机的观点,短文逻辑清楚,内容完整连贯。

3.高分亮点:本篇使用的短语With the fast development of technology;at any time;focus on;lose oneself in;communicate with。

高分句型:

I think we should pay attention to what our teacher says instead of playing with the phones.(宾语从句)

It is natural for students to have mobile phones in hand.(固定句型)But the mobile phones also bring some bad influences on their study and life.

They can’t focus on their study.

They lose themselves in their own life and don’t want to communicate with others.。

【点睛】本篇看图作文书写前需仔细观察图片,根据图片提示确定文章的线索,根据线索陈述使用手机会带来的影响并阐述自己对这种行为所持的态度;书写时要紧扣线索,做到内容完整、连贯;书写时注意本篇涉及现在进行时和一般现在时2种时态,要避免时态使用混乱。

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