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随着*热的掀起,越来越多的外国人想来*体验观光。假如你是张利,你们学校的外教Mary打算暑假邀请全家人来温...

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随着*热的掀起,越来越多的外国人想来*体验观光。假如你是张利,你们学校的外教Mary打算暑假邀请全家人来温...

随着*热的掀起,越来越多的外国人想来*体验观光。假如你是张利,你们学校的外教Mary打算暑假邀请全家人来温州游玩,需要一名导游。请你根据下表写一封邮件推荐自己,阐明自己的优势并告知做他们的导游对你自己也有帮助。

Introduction

outgoing, good at English,…

Reasons

make friends, happy to help others,…

注意:1.短文内容应包含所有要点并适当扩充。

2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;

3.字数:110左右。开头已给出。

Dear Mary,

I’m Zhang Li. I’m happy to hear that your family will come to Wenzhou this summer holiday.____________________________________________________________________                                                                                          

                                                                                                                                                                       

                                                                                                                                                                       

                                                                                                                                                                      

                                                                           

Looking forward to your reply.

Zhang Li

【回答】

Dear Mary,

I’m Zhang Li. I’m happy to hear that your family will come to Wenzhou this summer holiday. I’m glad to be your guide if you want.

I think I’m the right person. For one thing, I’m good at English. I’ve learnt English for six years. You know I communicate with you well in our class. For another, I’m outgoing and friendly. I think I can have a good time with your family. Finally, I know Wenzhou really well. I can help you to plan a wonderful vacation.

Being your guide can not only help you, but also bring me a lot. I’m really happy to help others, it makes my life meaningful. As your guide, I can make more friends. Moreover, I can improve my spoken English. Choose me, you will never regret.

Looking forward to your reply.

Zhang Li

【解析】本文为应用文。写信推荐自己当导游,并说明做导游的优势以及对你的好处。根据要表达的内容确定时态并能准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑。

【两点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别是运用了一些连词,如for one thing ... for another, Finally, not only ... but also, moreover等。增强了逻辑关系,增加了上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确*、连贯*以及简洁*。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。

修改润*。修改润*是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。

知识点:其他

题型:书面表达

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