问题详情：
近日，“校园欺凌”（bullying in school）已经成为社会热点话题，阅读完上面的*后你有何感想？请你根据下面的写作要求，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1.“校园欺凌”对我们有什么危害？
2.碰到此类事件，我们应该怎样做？ 请提出两点建议。
3.人人有责保持校园安全，并呼吁同学们*“校园欺凌”。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，不必抄写在答题卡上。
Good afternoon, everyone.
Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school. ________________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you.
【回答】
【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你对“校园欺凌”的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Today I am going to……，It makes us hard to……，If someone bullies us……，It’s everyone’s duty to……，I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Good afternoon, everyone.
Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school. In my opinion, bullying can make us feel unsafe and unhappy. It makes us hard to learn at school and get on well with others. No one has the right to hurt us. If someone bullies us or we see bullying happening, we shouldn’t be afraid to stop it. First, we should trust ourselves and tell them it’s not right to do like that. Second, we can ask teachers and parents for help.
It’s everyone’s duty to make schools safe. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying.
That’s all. Thank you.
【写作亮点】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我演讲稿的目的是谈论“校园欺凌”，接下来介绍“校园欺凌”的危害以及如何面对这个问题，最后呼吁同学们*“校园欺凌”。此处talk about, in one’s opinion, make sb do sth, get on well with sb, be afraid to do sth, ask sb for help, be friendly to等这些词组的运用也让文章增*不少。
知识点：其他
题型：书面表达
