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你的好朋友约翰是一名九年级的学生，目前他遇到了不少麻烦。请根据提示内容，用英语写一篇介绍好朋友约翰的短文
Personality | 有条理，注意细节，富有爱心 |
Hobby | 痴迷于画画，擅长用**来表达自己的想法；最喜欢黄*，因为…… |
Problems | 1. 父母对自己很严格, 太在乎考试分数 2. 经常熬夜做作业，疑惑是否值得花费如此多的时间 |
Your advice | 1. ...... 2. ...... |
注意：1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 要点须用展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数在100个左右，短文首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
John, a Grade 9 student, is my best friend. He is
I really hope my advice can be valuable to him.
【回答】
John, a Grade 9 student, is my best friend. He is well-organized and pays attention to details. Besides, he has a heart full of is crazy about drawing and he is good at expressing his own thoughts by using colors. His favourite color is yellow as it is the color of the sun and it represents success.
However, he has some problems at present. First, his parents are strict with him and they care too much about marks after each exam. Then, he often stays up so late to finish his homework that he even doubts whether it is worth spending so much time on it.
My suggestions are as follows. I think he’d better communicate more with his parents. It’s also a good idea for him to plan his time carefully so that he can finish his homework on time. In addition, maybe he should make a list of all the homework that he needs to do and work out how much time he needs.
I really hope my advice can be valuable to him.
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