問題詳情：
近日，“校園欺凌”（bullying in school）已經成為社會熱點話題，閱讀完上面的*後你有何感想？請你根據下面的寫作要求，寫一篇演講稿談談你的看法。內容包括：
1.“校園欺凌”對我們有什麼危害？
2.碰到此類事件，我們應該怎樣做？ 請提出兩點建議。
3.人人有責保持校園安全，並呼籲同學們*“校園欺凌”。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名。
2. 語句連貫，詞數80個左右。作文的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數，不必抄寫在答題卡上。
Good afternoon, everyone.
Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school. ________________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you.
【回答】
【寫作思路】
這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇演講稿談談你對“校園欺凌”的看法。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時和一般將來時，人稱為單數第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Today I am going to……，It makes us hard to……，If someone bullies us……，It’s everyone’s duty to……，I hope……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關係。
【參考範文】
Good afternoon, everyone.
Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school. In my opinion, bullying can make us feel unsafe and unhappy. It makes us hard to learn at school and get on well with others. No one has the right to hurt us. If someone bullies us or we see bullying happening, we shouldn’t be afraid to stop it. First, we should trust ourselves and tell them it’s not right to do like that. Second, we can ask teachers and parents for help.
It’s everyone’s duty to make schools safe. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying.
That’s all. Thank you.
【寫作亮點】
本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我演講稿的目的是談論“校園欺凌”，接下來介紹“校園欺凌”的危害以及如何面對這個問題，最後呼籲同學們*“校園欺凌”。此處talk about, in one’s opinion, make sb do sth, get on well with sb, be afraid to do sth, ask sb for help, be friendly to等這些片語的運用也讓文章增*不少。
知識點：其他
題型：書面表達
