问题详情：
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文*有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Peter Judd joined in the army when he was eighteen, and for several months he was teaching how to be a good soldier. He did quite well in everything besides shooting. One day he and his friends were practising their shooting, and both all of them were doing quite well except Peter. After he has shot at the target nine times and had not hit it once, the officer was trying to teach the young soldiers to shoot said, “You’re quite hopeless. Peter! Don’t waste your last Bullet, too! Go behind that wall and shoot you with it! Peter felt ashamed. He went behind the wall, and a few seconds late, the officer and the other soldiers heard the sound of a shot. But Peter was all right. “I’m sorry, sir.” He said, “and I missed again.”
【回答】
1. Peter Judd joined in the army
【*】去掉in【试题解析】参*要用join the army.
2. and for several months he was teaching how to be a good soldier
【*】teaching改为taught【试题解析】被动语态“被教会”
3. He did quite well in everything besides shooting.
【*】besides改为except【试题解析】besides除了..还有...，except除了..之外，此处为“除了*击，他做的都很好”
4. and both all of them were doing quite well except Peter。
【*】去掉both 【试题解析】所有人为all of them ,both为多余项。
5. After he has shot at the target nine times and had not hit it once,
【*】has改为had【试题解析】全文时态都为过去时，故用had.
6. the officer ∧ was trying to teach the young soldiers to shoot said,
【*】was前加who【试题解析】定语从句，who在从句中做主语，不可省略。
7. Don’t waste your last bullet, too!
【*】too改为either【试题解析】 否定句中表达也，要用either。
8. Go behind that wall and shoot you with it!
【*】you改为yourself 【试题解析】*死自己，用反身代词。
9. He went behind the wall, and a few seconds late
【*】late改为later【试题解析】late晚的，迟到的later..之后，此处指几分钟之后。
10. and I missed again
【*】and改为but
知识点：其他
题型：短文改错
